Rewrite an essay

I need support with this Writing question so I can learn better.

Hi, I have this essay you wrote and I would like you to correct it with the feedback I got from my teacher.

Essay should be between 500-750 words.

Include one-paragraph analysis in which you explain what you learned about writing from the assignment and progression of that particular essay. In the analysis paragraph, be sure to include literary vocabulary you’ve learned along the way when discussing the essay (e.g., hook, point of view, structure, diction, grammar, imagery, dialogue, setting, hyperbole, personification, metaphor, etc.)

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