Revisions & one body paragraph.

I don’t know how to handle this English question and need guidance.

Question: How does economic inequality impact the American dream?

The Outside Source

This essay requires you find at least one outside source, but not more than two. Your source(s)should be reliable and need to comment on some aspect of your argument. You should include at least 2 quotes (MLA- in text format) or paraphrased quotes from this outside source. You may use any of the following:

  • Online article or webpage
  • Video
  • Podcast

Some improvements may includes

  • Writing a more effective conclusion.
  • Editing for clearer grammar.
  • Eliminating spelling errors.

You will be including a body paragraph and make revisions to help this essay become stronger. I have attached the essay you will be editing on.

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